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[[Future Funk] ケチャップと卵]

sidechain the track to kick, it will reduce the small "clips" where it doesn't line up
snare also doesn't sound that good, an open hi hat would fill up the space more, make it relatively quiet with stereo width so its not centred or pan it, the panned hats are quite nice and add variation, increase sub on kick a little and reduce the highs/mid highs, it will open up the vocals and highs.

[Go Again (Joke/Messing Around Project)]

Sounds pretty interesting, crashes could use some widening to give more space to the kick and a longer tail with reverb, and panning the hats would be nice, though it is a "mess around" project.

JazzDew responds:

Thank's for the criticism, I'll keep that in mind for future project's!

[Coolepic]

Sounds pretty nice, Kick has too much highs though and i feel as though a kick that had a more powerful sub and less highs would suit this better, the sub is pretty loud compared to everything else and you should sidechain it against the kick, the arp sounds really dry halfway through, pan the perc away from the centre so it doesnt take away from the kick and clap and maybe add some reverb too it to make it more wet.

[Sun Attic]

it's okay, could be eqd a bit better to allow more room for the sub, then you could lower the volume of it so it doesnt duck the low mids and mids as much, drums also sound weak, might be the percussion layered over it.

[Behold, Our Disgust]

Amazing composition!

[DEDlockedX - Kawaii Future Bass (unfinished)]

Great intro!, you should sidechain to make the kick more impactful, and maybe add some stereo width to the saw stack, and also eq the midrange of the lfo saw a little to give more room for the main leads, make sure you high pass everything that isnt supposed to be below 200/300hz , it gives much more room for the bass and kick.

dragonfruitreal responds:

Ok i'll go fix that thanks for the feedback

[Homely]

Pretty nice, snare tail could be a little longer, sounds pretty empty, maybe some open hi hats and crashes at some points to keep things interesting but otherwise, great arrangement!

TeraVex responds:

Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I like those recommendations! I'll let ya in on a secret... I might include this on a future project and there I will most definitely include those embellishments!